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"瞻前不顾后"与"怎么回头"
本帖最后由 bianca 于 2009-4-10 07:40 编辑 # k* G1 e$ L* c' \2 c
" t( L9 d6 n2 R5 P& _ 若绮的歌词,寥寥数十字,虽说韵脚、平仄都不十分讲究,而且还是对着原有的外文歌词半改半译,却花了小半个钟头;若是单单写文,顺的时候,千字也憋出来了。可见写词,是个苦差事。向所有的词作者致敬~1 Z5 a& x& R! [9 W; _2 u ]
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这是《我在云上爱你》的最后一个章节啦,虽然扯了许多暗线(众:受不了这个自恋的女人,以为自己的布局多么高明!),都将在续篇里解答。我也是为大家好,尽快给一个HE嘛,停在这个章节,倒霉过的似乎稍有缓解,要倒霉的暂时还有几天好日子过,黎方的矛盾并没化解,但也不至爆发;停在这一节,大家都比较幸福啦,所以就我个人来讲,希望在此作一个幸福的定格。呵呵,免得大家总是误解,这会是一篇悲文。4 L: Y ?; l3 L- J2 Q0 Y
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开始写《我在云上爱你续篇》的时候,这些苦命的孩子就要继续折腾喽;不过,依然不是悲文就对啦。还请大家继续关注喽~ _2 x. Y: [8 H. n" _0 ?
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7 L% r7 ^+ P/ V( k, j 闲言碎语不再讲,附上《怎么回头》的原版,来自hayleyWestenra.2 F- ^ s6 z" L
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If I could take this moment forever
; L! s) f# l6 R) _: E" bTurn the pages of my mind 8 ]+ Y. H8 S T; H
To another place and time , X! c! c7 l, x
We would never say goodbye 2 K- C: F' g1 \: I
4 Y, i' }* W4 @+ CIf I could find the words I would speak them ; l% M& [6 ?5 {- _
Then I wouldn't be tongue tied S4 z' j3 r7 R7 {& ~' _/ i
Will I look them to your eyes " b8 O* W% E* A0 x' u
We would never say goodbye
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If I could stop the moon ever arising / j; @. W! b* @) a9 Q
Day would not become the night
: c, j% w$ F0 C7 _3 y n/ EWould't feel this cold inside
! M6 {# s0 {8 v: E0 g: w% kAnd we'd never say goodbye
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. ~/ G; ?5 l; p1 _: [I wish that our dreams were frozen
5 O: T9 H. }+ E9 k; p- LThen our hearts would not be broken
1 {/ E2 x" C9 @. x' T4 _6 `" y; aWhen we let each other go ! }2 y3 N4 U. {' B) p) @
! j/ L+ ^5 x' r- m/ L6 `" v7 dIf I could steal this moment forever 9 t4 o1 O$ B% |+ C. u% [% i# A) J4 S
Paint a picture perfect smile ; Y, ?1 f0 N2 j( r. n9 p6 J
So our story stayed alive 8 Z) z) j6 p( ?7 O) V& g' @$ X2 i
We would never say goodbye : I& S6 W" e( D% e5 D0 t! B
Ahh............
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